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高三短文改错解析Dear Visitors Welcome to Hangzhou Hangzhou is a

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Dear Visitors,

Welcome to Hangzhou.Hangzhou is a beautiful city famous for her West Lake.As the number of visitor increasing year by year,we are sorry to see empty bottles and plastic bags floated on the lake,and even flowers picked up and trees destroyed,which does harm to the image of the city.I must appeal to everyone to behave properly.Here and now I strongly suggest:

First,strengthen the environment﹣protecting awareness of the people who throws rubbish here and there random.Second,it's high time that the government takes further measures to protect the beauty of West Lake such as placing good﹣looking dustbins at visitors'convenience.Third,be a volunteer to beautify the lake now and then,but I believe with the joint efforts of everyone there will exist forever the saying"Up above there is heaven; down below there are Suzhou and Hangzhou".

【考点】短文改错.

【分析】文章讲述了随着游客的增加,杭州西湖的环境污染问题越来越严重.为此,作者提出了几点建议,希望人们加强环境保护意识.

【解答详解:

1.As改为With;介词错误.句中名词后接分词increasing,要用with来构成,即with+名词+分词构成with短语,在句中作伴随状语.

2.visitor改为visitors;名词错误.句意表达的是泛指游客,要用可数名词的复数.

3.floated改为floating;分词错误.句中float作see的宾语补足语,float与bottles and bags构成主谓关系,要用现在分词,即see…doing…看见…正在做某事.

4.up去掉;短语搭配错误.pick up捡起,pick摘;句意表达的是花被摘了.

5.throws改为throw;主谓一致错误.句中who引导定语从句修饰people,who指代先行词并在从句中作主语,谓语动词要和先行词people保持一致.

6.random改为randomly;副词错误.句中random修饰谓语动词throws,要用副词形式.

7.takes改为took;句型用法错误.it's high time that后接从句时,从句的谓语要用过去时态构成句式虚拟.

8.加the;冠词错误.the West Lake西湖,专有名词.

9.at改为for;介词错误.句意表达的是目的,意思是为了游客的方便.

10.but改为so/and;连词错误.句意表达的承接,不是转折.


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