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高三短文改错解析Consider how your first reaction is when you

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Consider how your first reaction is when you see a dwarf(侏儒)walking along the street. Do you think of him like an equal? Probable no. To the world, he is an "abnormal creature" belonged to a minority of people that include those who can't see, talk or hear. It may seem that they are born to be gossiped about and glare at. Always citizens are educated to take care and show respect for handicapped people. From the bottom of our hearts, do we sincerely treat they equally? Why do we still laugh when we watch unusually short clown in a circus show? The only reason is that, to us, they are funny and amusing. Then, we realize that the only result of education is that we learn it to hide our curiosity and our impolite towards those people.

答案解析

第一处:Consider后面跟宾语从句,连词要在从句中作系动词is的表语,而how引起宾语从句时,作方式状语。故how改为 what。

第二处:think of sb. as…是固定搭配,指“认为某人是……”。故like改为as。

第三处:Probably no.是简略回答,意思是“或许不会”。故Probable改为Probably。

第四处:belong是不及物动词,是“属于”的意思;属于abnormal creature与belong之间是主动关系,所以用现在分词作定语。故belonged改为belonging。

第五处:glared与and之前的born一样,都用在系动词are后面,构成被动。故glare改为glared。

第六处:take care of…为“负责;照顾;关怀”的意思,是固定短语,故care后加of。

第七处:及物动词treat后面跟宾格形式作宾语。故they改为them。

第八处:此处指“一个非常矮的小丑”或“非常矮的小丑”,用单数或复数。故watch后加an或clown改为clowns。

第九处:realize后面跟that引起的宾语从句;宾语从句中that引起表语从句;表语从句中learn的宾语是后面的不定式“to hide…”。故删去it。

第十处:形容词性物主代词our后面跟名词,此处指“隐藏起我们的不礼貌行为”。故impolite改为impoliteness。

【备注】当你看到一个侏儒走在街上,你的第一反应是什么?你认为他是一个平等的人吗?我们对他们该有什么样的正确的态度呢?


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