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2014年呼伦贝尔市中考英语作文及范文 My mother

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母爱情深,母爱无价。学会感恩,学会回报。某英语网站举办以“My mother”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据下面表格提供的信息,写一篇短文。
提示:1.短文应包括表格中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明。
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名。
3.词数90词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

写作要点 1.介绍自己的母亲, 信息包括年龄、外貌特征、工作、特长、兴趣和爱好。
2.描述母亲为自己做了什么以及自己的感受。
3.你将做什么来回报母爱。
My mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother.

书面表达评分标准:
第一档:(13~15分)
能涵盖所有要点,要点表述清楚、合理,表达充分,层次结构清晰,字迹工整,语言流畅,有1~2处语法及个别拼写错误;
第二档:(9~12分)
能涵盖所有要点,要点表述比较充分,层次结构比较清晰,语言比较流畅,有3~4处语法错误及少数拼写错误;
第三档:(5~8分)
能涵盖大部分要点,要点表述不够清晰,语言不够流畅,有5~6处语法错误及较多拼写错误;
第四档:(0~4分)
仅表达个别要点,语言表述错误很多或仅有几个单词可读,不能完整地表达思想。

My Mother
We need love. We also need to love. The person I love most is my mother. My mother is 41 years old. She is a woman of medium build with long black hair. She is a history teacher in a middle school. She is good at cooking and be interested in playing volleyball. Her hobby is reading.
She did a lot for me when I was a child. She bought whatever I needed for my study, even though she didn’t have much money. She sent me from piano lessons to dancing lessons at the weekend. She cooked delicious and healthy food for me. I am deeply moved by what my mother has done for me.
When I grow up, I will do what I can to make my mother happy. I will find a good job after I graduate from college. I’ll save money and buy beautiful clothes that make her look still young. I’ll take her to wonderful sights around China. Most importantly, I will stay with her when I have free time. That’s what she wants most, I think.

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